There was definitely sexual tension in the air as Elisa explained her planting methods to a tinker who was feigning interest in order to get some work repairing pots. This scene:
Kneeling there, her hand went out toward his legs in the greasy black trousers. Her hesitant fingers almost touched the cloth. Then her hand dropped to the ground. She crouched low like a fawning dog.had me wondering if sex was next.
It wasn't, but she was definitely aroused by the tinker's interest in her plants and his free lifestyle on the road. I've read a couple of reviews which try to play Freud with the short story, but I'm not ready to acknowledge this as a plea for feminism.
I think she was lonely and isloated at times and perhaps bored but not totally unhappy with her husband.
At the end of the story, she starts mentioning the possibility of attending the fights, which she rejected earlier, instead of going to the movies. It took me back to her early description of the tinker:
His eyes were dark, and they were full of the brooding that gets in the eyes of teamsters and of sailors.
Maybe she wanted her husband Henry to be more virile or just wanted more interaction with virile men or something as basic as more excitement in her/ their lives.
Please jump in with thoughts because this well written short story gave me plenty to chew on. Maybe a few things I missed or ignored.
6/26/13
Thinking about Steinbeck's Travels with Charley & Sweet Thursday. He wrote some exquisite descriptions of American characters
12/05/13
Steinbeck from The Winter of our Discontent: No one wants advice, only corroboration.
6/10/14
from Travels with Charley“A sad soul can kill you quicker, far quicker, than a germ.”
8/21/14
There are no ugly questions except those clothed in condescension. (East of Eden, 1952)
12/24/14
So much cop bashing in certain circles, I extracted a quote from a Steinbeck letter to Adlai Stevenson in 1959. A bit preachy but worth readingWhen I left Bruton, I checked out with Officer 'Arris, the lone policeman who kept the peace in five villages, unarmed and on a bicycle.
6/9/15
Like this Steinbeck quote from a Paris Review interview. linkFor a while I was a vicious fighter but it wasn't to win. It was to get it over and get the hell out of there.
7/4/16
Only fair to quote Adlai Stevenson, a Democrat, on July 4th:"A diplomat's life is made up of three ingredients: protocol, Geritol and alcohol" Stevenson to the The New York Times Magazine (7 February 1965)
7/6/17
Here's one to ponder: “If you find yourself in a fair fight, your tactics suck.” #JohnSteinbeck
7/5/20
Just something to ponder : “Tell 'em to God. Don' go burdenin' other people with your sins. That ain't decent.” #JohnSteinbeck , The Grapes of Wrath
4/5/22
"The first principle of a free society is an untrammeled flow of words in an open forum."
Adlai Stevenson(1900-1965), Democrat who lost to Ike twice in bids to be our President.
10/30/22
The Strand Magazine reprinted a column this week that Steinbeck wrote for Le Figaro in 1954 when he lived in Paris. He mentioned that McCarthyism "cannot be wiped out because, by destroying it, democracy would destroy itself.” Basically, let the system sort it out, which the USA senate did during the mid 1950s.
"a farmer's wife with planter's hands" -just that phrase is loaded with so many avenues. It reeks of a plain life filled with basic simplicities and routine. as well as unfullfilled dreams. Her planter's hands are skilled and strong, and adept at dispensing the correct tender care. but they are weathered and worn, and lined with work and callouses, suggesting a hidden faded beauty beyond her simple dress and sun kissed face. the stoic strength of resignment.
ReplyDeletethe valley is closed off, the road is not the normal route. the decision made at the fork in the road leads to a dead end.
To me this story is so densely packed with implication that it's literally difficult to read thru to the end.
there is a distinct lack of passion between the woman and her husband, who comes across as kind and reasonable, and practical. in contrast to the tinker, who is unpredictably sly, and exploits her most basic weakness so easily.
do the flowers symbolize her legacy? and is that why the idea of passing the plants to another's farm so appealing? we'd all like to think that our lives have meaning, and even leave a lasting impact.
why didn't she choose to go to the fights?
scurds here. not sure how to profile.
ReplyDeletehey scurds- definitely think Elisa's passing the plants was tied to her feeling meaningful . I think she opted out of attending the fights cuz she thought it may be viewed as unladylike.
ReplyDeleteShe's pretty pissy toward her old man. Not my style. I think I'd give her a good kick in the ass while she was in the prone position with her terrier fingers busy killing off sowbugs and aphids. Then go enjoy a dinner in town....and the fights......alone. That's the Galfur way.
ReplyDeletegalf- How about if she were taking her care of the greens at your golf course?
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